man that was great! I rarely laugh out loud when I'm the only one in the room, but that was too funny.
Loved it, love the new characters (new baddy looks kinda like molarom from Temple of doom), I was so genuinely excited to see this and it's come out on my birthday weekend!
Top notch work my friend, envious of your talent!
I genuinely didn't enjoy any aspect of this, the art was terrible, like complete lack of effort and not in a funny way...just kind of bad.
The intro almost made me knee jerk a "0" within like 5 seconds...
the jokes are pretty lame, voice acting was miserable, i mean theres literally a point where you can hear something rub against the microphone, you couldn't have re-recorded that?
The fox guy's voice was awful especially when he was getting mad, maybe I'm missing something...but it sounded like some asshole doing a stupid voice that just wasn't fucking funny at all...
Everything about this was annoying. You get 1 for effort, and 1 because I'm trying to be as nice as I can and think that you probably COULD do something good, there's enough reason here to think it's possible. this one just was not it...
keep trying, the next one will be better.
well theres really nothing to this, I'm pretty sure it even breaks some of the guidelines of submission...but my suggestion would be:
do the work you're meant to be doing in 2d class, and pay attention to your teacher.
it's sadly ironic that you would stop paying attention to someone whose teaching you the fundamentals of animation to work on this.
Anyways keep your chin up, keep working on stuff, and don't get too butt hurt if people blam you for putting half assed effort up here.
Don't be afraid to spend some time on it next time. I guess I'm a jackass I didn't really even think the idea was that funny, but beyond that just from an animation standpoint spend time on the drawings, especially if you're just going to tween everything (which I wouldn't recommend you do).
Don't let it get you down though, just keep working at it you'll get there!
At least its not a Stick fight or madness rip off, right?
Yeah I Think It Could Have Been Better If Pulled Off Nicer. But Yeah My Animation Skills & Drawing Isn't Exactly Great Right Now. So This Is What You Could Say Is Part Of Practice. Thanks For Your Constructive Crit =D
awesome job on the animtion, I had to give you a lower rating just because it lacks sound and music and pretty much all of the things that make it a "movie"
I understand this was a test and I would say a very successful one. The only gripe I have with any aspect of the artwork is that it is a bit flat, just a little more shading detail or something, especially on an animation this short would go a long ways.
regardless good job, I really dig the animation
Yes thankies :) It was just a test that I did over my weekend and spare time. I'd add sound, but I really have no idea what sort of sound would apply well to it ^_^"
Ha ha ha
Man I still do that Macho Man Randy Savage voice from time to time to annoy my girlfriend. That was pretty funny I have to admit.
Alittle rough around the edges, but all in all I liked the drawings, I'd like to see you find a good balance between tweened animations and actual cel animation. The music, props, characters everything was pretty much spot on.
The end was pretty fucking awful, in a good way.
Keep it up I can't wait to see more from you down the road.
well the best part of the animation was the metal slug sprites you used...other than that, there's no sound, I'm not sure wtf happened in the end, and the 30 seconds it did take seemed to last forever because it was so slow.
better luck next time though, keep your chin up.
I'm a fat little girl. O_o
Eh, not too good
No offense I didn't like the drawings or the squiggle vision style of animation. Voice work wasn't that good
you said you've been working on it awhile, I guess I just anticipated more
Keep at it though, you've got the right idea just needs more finesse.
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